We will try to cheer up ( Draft )
- Bluewsky
- Mar 5, 2022
- 1 min read
When we meet
We should no more talk about the sad weeks
It is only compressing the solid bones of my skull
Rubbing the pen deeply lodged in our heart
It only fills my eyes with this salty water
My wound won't heal
So, please,
We will talk instead about our fantasies
The white house you lived in, its peculiarities
The affection your grandmum had for lilies
Reminding us the lessons we should keep
The words we shall repeat
What it takes for a man to dream, still
Back against the wall
Steep cliff, deep well
Whisper into my ear
We can do this
hey everyone, I hope you are well, I would really like to have your critics on this poem, about anything that can make it better, I would really appreciate that, and I will definitely return the favor in the future.




Dear, when we see something perfect we don't demand corrections. We embrace its beauty. The poem is so common and so rare at the same time, even if little. Good writing!