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Long day

I am walking down the street


Before the sun turns its light off

I should be home

Mum said

Hunger lies in the dark

Waiting just as much as my

Stomach rumbles


Or was it... "Danger..."


At my appartment finally

Hi mum, my day was long

And I am "staaaaarving"


Mum ?


Hmm I forgot...

.

.

.

*The mobile number you called is currently

Unavailable please try again later*. *beep*.

Written by me

Photo by Luca M/unsplash.

11 Comments


Rachita
Rachita
Apr 07, 2022

You can maybe write a part where you try to call her out after reaching home but then you notice her picture on the wall, maybe?

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Bluewsky
Bluewsky
Apr 07, 2022
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Thanks !!!

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Rachita
Rachita
Apr 07, 2022

Could you please explain what exactly you wish to tell us by this poem?

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Bluewsky
Bluewsky
Apr 29, 2022
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I shall write a story with your idea, I will have to ask for your help

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